David Alpaugh

Short Story on a Painting
by Gustav Klimt

Lawrence Ferlinghetti

The Kiss, 1907

          They are kneeling upright on a flowered bed

                                 He

                                       has just caught her there

                                                                              and holds her still

                                      Her gown

                                                         has slipped down

                                                                                           off her shoulder

                            He has an urgent hunger

                                                               His dark head

                                                                               bends to hers

                                                                                               hungrily

                                  And the woman the woman

                                        turns her tangerine lips from his

                                                 one hand like the head of a dead swan

                                                       draped down over

                                                                                       his heavy neck

                                                             the fingers

                                                                  strangely crimped

                                                                                 tightly together

                                         her other arm doubled up

                                                                against her tight breast

                                              her hand a languid claw

                                                                               clutching his hand

                                                    which would turn her mouth

                                                                                                     to his

                                     her long dress made

                                                            of multicolored blossoms

                                                                      quilted on gold

                                        her Titian hair

                                                          with blue stars in it

                                           And his gold

                                                               harlequin robe

                                                                                 checkered with

                                                                                               dark squares

                                               Gold garlands

                                                                       stream down over

                                                                                             her bare calves &

                                                                                                    tensed feet

                              Nearby there must be

                                                       a jeweled tree

                                                                 with glass leaves aglitter

                                                                         in the gold air

                              It must be

                                                morning

                                                             in a faraway place somewhere

                              They

                                      are silent together

                                                                     as in a flowered field

                                           upon the summer couch

                                                                          which must be hers

                                  And he holds her still

                                                                         so passionately

                                               holds her head to his

                                                                         so gently so insistently

                                                 to make her turn

                                                                             her lips to his

                              Her eyes are closed

                                                                    like folded petals

                              She

                                       will not open

                                                                He

                                                                       is not the One

This month's poem about Gustav Klimt's painting The Kiss is from Lawrence Ferlinghetti's collection of ekphrastic poetry entitled When I Look at Pictures.

"Ekphrastic" (from the Greek word "ekphrazein," which means to describe or proclaim) applies to poems that focus their attention on other works of art. Famous examples include Keats' Ode on a Grecian Urn, Rilke's Archaic Torso of Apollo, and Auden's Musée de Beaux Arts. Those poems not only vividly describe an ancient urn, a fragmented statue of Apollo, and the Brueghel painting The Fall of Icarus, they lead to universal insights inspired by each work of art.

Although Ferlinghetti calls his poem a "Short Story," a glance at his creative line structure assures us that he is writing poetry. Each short line focuses on a single detail within Klimt's painting, including the lovers' positions on the canvas, their bodily actions, the color and flow of the man's robe, the woman's dress, her facial expression, etc.

Ferlinghetti's indentations invite us to move our eyes back and forth from one part of The Kiss to the next, savoring each detail before moving on, as we might do were we in a gallery, studying a great work of art. The poet is acting as our docent.

Ferlinghetti's first eleven lines say nothing surprising about The Kiss. The lovers are "kneeling upright" on a "flowered bed." The man has "caught" the woman in an embrace and "holds her still." Her "gown" has "slipped down" "off her shoulder." The man's head is "dark" and "bends" to the woman "hungrily."

So far, our poet's description does not challenge the usual view of The Kiss which is widely seen as a celebration of romantic and erotic love, wherein a man and a woman join in a rapturous embrace. The man leans lovingly toward the woman, who appears to blissfully accept his fervent kiss. The golden aura surrounding the couple hints at an almost mystical connection, symbolizing a blending of souls by iconic lovers.

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As our poet pays attention to the woman's body language, however, a radically different narrative starts to emerge. Our docent points out that the fingers on one of the woman's hands clutch one of the man's hands like "a languid claw"; while her other hand (its "fingers / strangely crimped / tightly together") looks like "the head of a dead swan / draped down over / his heavy neck" as she "turns her tangerine lips" away from him. These details make us wonder if Klimt is trying to capture the essence of a woman in love or is up to something more complicated.

We cannot see the man's eyes, face, or mouth, buried as they are in the act of kissing, although the ardor with which he cradles the woman's head and presses his lips to her cheek imply that he, at least, is passionately in love.

Of course, if Klimt is to give us insight into what the woman may be feeling, he must turn her head away from the man so we can study her face; but why has he painted her arms, hands, and fingers in a manner that suggests she is determined to prevent the man from kissing her lips? How are we to put together such resistance with the dreamy, blissful expression on her face? Like Mona Lisa, here's a woman with a mystery.

Some feminist critics have argued that her closed eyes and tilted head suggest she is a victim of male domination. Others go a step further, aguing that Klimt is alluding to the Apollo and Daphne myth, wherein, smitten by Cupid's arrow, the god pursues a woman who, in Ovid's story, "dislikes all suitors" and vows to "enjoy virginity forever." Just as Apollo is about to seize Daphne, she begs her father to destroy her beauty which has brought men "too much delight." Her wish is granted. Daphne escapes Apollo's embrace by being transformed into a laurel tree.

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The problem with this interpretation is that however we assess the expression on the woman's face, it hardly indicates that she is repulsed or visibly upset by the man's passion for her.

Ferlinghetti understands that if the complex story he wants to tell is to be persuasive he must acknowledge the sheer beauty of Klimt's art. The aureate feeling all those colorful flowers on the woman's dress, overlaid on the man's golden robe, cannot help but make viewers feel that The Kiss does indeed celebrate idealized romantic love. Our docent agrees that the painting does present a gorgeous vision.

                   her long dress made
                               of multicolored blossoms
                                    quilted on gold
                    her Titian hair
                              with blue stars in it
                      And his gold
                                harlequin robe
                                         checkered with
                                                dark squares
                        Gold garlands
                                    stream down over
                                              her bare calves &
                                                   tensed feet


Only the woman's "tensed" feet (a reminder of her "crimped" fingers and "tight breast") suggest that anything is off kilter in the pastoral paradise he describes.

Ferlinghetti now ups the idyllic ante by going beyond anything depicted in the painting with a verbal vision of what the woman may be imagining:

                Nearby there must be
                            a jeweled tree
                                 with glass leaves aglitter
                                     in the gold air
                It must be
                        morning
                               in a faraway place somewhere
                They
                   are silent together
                                   as in a flowered field
                      upon the summer couch
                                     which must be hers


Is she not dreaming of a bower of bliss where she and her chosen one can consummate their love? The "couch" where that can occur "must be hers." She must desire it; but as we take another look at her would be lover who "so gently so insistently" attempts to turn her "tangerine lips to his" we notice that:

                Her eyes are closed
                                like folded petals


She is a flower that will not open. Our poet is now ready to reveal the painting's mystery. With just five words in his final two lines, he picks us up and puts us back into reality by brilliantly understating the reason why this woman cannot return what feels like it should be a glorious mutual kiss. It's because:

                          He
                             is not the One


How lonely that "He" feels, marooned on its line. How much disappointment awaits the lover when, inevitably, he must learn that he is not "the One." In a painting and poem so replete with the splendor of love, we cannot help but wish that He was our She 's ideal. That would make for a simpler painting and poem.

Our docent leaves us on the gallery steps to decide for ourselves where the woman's heart lies. Perhaps she thought she was in love with the man, but caught in his embrace for the first time, realizes she was mistaken. Still, although the lady cannot love him, she feels the power and beauty of his passion and cannot help but imagine what it would be like to experience such romantic rapture in the arms of the man she actually longs for (or, more likely, the ideal "one" she someday hopes to meet).

Were we able to chat with Gustav Klimt, he would not likely weigh in on the questions his asymmetrical kiss poses. Klimt refused to explain his art, other than to say that "Whoever wants to know something about me as an artist ought to look carefully at my pictures to see in them what I am and what I want."

We are fortunate to be able to look at Klimt's art through the eyes of Lawrence Ferlinghetti, a painter as well as a poet, whose storied revelation concerning this iconic painting can only enrich our admiration and understanding for the most beautiful and enigmatic kiss ever laid down on canvas.

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David Alpaugh 's newest collection of poetry is Seeing the There There  (Word Galaxy Press, 2023). Alpaugh's visual poems have been appearing monthly in Scene4 since February 2019. He lives in the San Francisco Bay Area where he has been a finalist for Poet Laureate of California. For more of his poetry, plays, and articles , check the Archives.
 

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